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Why Creative Writing Advice Can Ruin a College Essay
Ben Urwand, PhD Ben Urwand, PhD

Why Creative Writing Advice Can Ruin a College Essay

One of the worst pieces of advice students regularly receive is to treat their college essays like a piece of creative writing. They’re told to start with a dramatic scene, use vivid imagery, craft elaborate metaphors, and above all “show, don’t tell.” The assumption behind this advice is that if their essays read like compelling storytelling, admissions officers will be impressed.

But this advice misunderstands what the college essay is actually meant to evaluate. Here are three reasons storytelling advice often leads students in the wrong direction.

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Why Trying to Guess “What Colleges Want” Ruins Your College Essay
Ben Urwand, PhD Ben Urwand, PhD

Why Trying to Guess “What Colleges Want” Ruins Your College Essay

Here’s a classic message students hear when they begin the college application process: to get into a particular college, you need to figure out what that college wants to hear — and then tailor your essay accordingly.

The assumption behind this thinking is that if you know what colleges want, you can reverse-engineer your essay and get admitted. But this way of thinking misunderstands the whole purpose of the college essay. Here are three reasons why trying to guess what colleges want backfires every time.

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Why Your Life Isn’t Too Boring for a College Essay
Ben Urwand, PhD Ben Urwand, PhD

Why Your Life Isn’t Too Boring for a College Essay

“Nothing interesting has ever happened to me.” “My life is just really normal.” “I’m too boring to write a good college essay.”

These are some of the things students tell us every year as they try to come up with topics for their essays. They’ve usually read dozens of college essay examples online and feel intimidated by the dramatic stories they encounter. When they compare themselves to these examples, they conclude they have nothing to write about.

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Why “Show, Don’t Tell” Is Bad Advice for College Essays
Ben Urwand, PhD Ben Urwand, PhD

Why “Show, Don’t Tell” Is Bad Advice for College Essays

After spending over a decade on college essays, we’re convinced that “Show, don’t tell” creates more problems than it solves. The expression originally became popular in screenwriting and creative writing circles and applies well to those fields. But if you’re a high school senior applying to college, you’d be better off never hearing it. Here are the three main reasons “Show, don’t tell” one of the most common pieces of college essay advice online sabotages students as they embark on the college essay process.

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